A well presented and interesting peace. The peppering of the main discussion points with interesting and engaging analogies or example examples keeps the subject matter relevant.
However, the historical review launches from feudalism into capitalism without drawing out the threads of how these two were interr linked. Furthermore, no consideration is given to the 4000 year history of China where those initial mentalist roots were in operation long before being achieved by the west. There is also a preoccupation with wealth as theft which win expanded along the course of the thread ultimately leads to a failure in capitalism rather than an eroding of capitalism by socialism. The very factor as it points to as proof of this failure are those which have been apparent and ultimately destroyed communist and socialist regimes around the world-elite ism, inequality, corruption. This makes the second part more adversarial and likely to be contradicted.
The final part offers an interesting sidetrack that seems tacked onto the original subject matter but equally not expanded to demonstrate its relationship in a real way to the main argument.
This work shows the intelligence of the writer, and his gravity in keeping a heavy topic light, but is in danger of falling too readily into the main stream defences of socialism and attack upon capitalism. If the argument were reversed as presented in this piece, the arise of socialism and communism and it’s expansion throughout the west with as equally Acct for the destruction of capitalism and rise of inequality, elite ism and corruption.
It’s just this writers thinking is on a journey which is yet to produce the final product. What is presented here offers an enticing and encouraging offering of what may yet be revealed by the writer in due course.
Billy Byatt
A well presented and interesting peace. The peppering of the main discussion points with interesting and engaging analogies or example examples keeps the subject matter relevant.
However, the historical review launches from feudalism into capitalism without drawing out the threads of how these two were interr linked. Furthermore, no consideration is given to the 4000 year history of China where those initial mentalist roots were in operation long before being achieved by the west. There is also a preoccupation with wealth as theft which win expanded along the course of the thread ultimately leads to a failure in capitalism rather than an eroding of capitalism by socialism. The very factor as it points to as proof of this failure are those which have been apparent and ultimately destroyed communist and socialist regimes around the world-elite ism, inequality, corruption. This makes the second part more adversarial and likely to be contradicted.
The final part offers an interesting sidetrack that seems tacked onto the original subject matter but equally not expanded to demonstrate its relationship in a real way to the main argument.
This work shows the intelligence of the writer, and his gravity in keeping a heavy topic light, but is in danger of falling too readily into the main stream defences of socialism and attack upon capitalism. If the argument were reversed as presented in this piece, the arise of socialism and communism and it’s expansion throughout the west with as equally Acct for the destruction of capitalism and rise of inequality, elite ism and corruption.
It’s just this writers thinking is on a journey which is yet to produce the final product. What is presented here offers an enticing and encouraging offering of what may yet be revealed by the writer in due course.